Hello! My name is Zhou Wanfang. Today is Dragon Boat Festival. The weather is sunny and warm. I finished my homework and did(原形是do) housework. My parents were(原形是are) happy when they came（原形是come）back.They said（原形是say）:“My dear son，you did a good job. Let’s go out for eating the delicious food tonight.”I was（原形是am）very happy. I am waiting for the great food. By the way, what do you do on Dragon Boat Festival ? Happy Dragon Boat Festival ! Wish you have a good time！

     你好！我叫周万方。今天是端午节，天气晴朗和温暖。我已经做完作业了，还做了家务。爸爸妈妈现在回来，他们很高兴地说：“我的好孩子，我们今晚一起去吃美食。”我很开心，很期待吃美食。顺便说一说，你在端午节做什么呢？祝你端午节快乐，玩得开心！！

Miss Ye的话：万方这次的作文水平进步很大！方里面提到的吃美食之前的事情是已经发生的，写作中我们应该用“过去时”。而这个知识是在六年级才学到了，因此，Miss Ye在这里写出了个别单词的原形，而且Miss Ye尽量使用一些大家都学过或曾听老师说过的语言来作少少修改，希望同学们能看得懂。万方，好样的，加油！

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      Hello! My name is Zhou Wanfang. Today is Dragon Boat Festival.The weather is sunny and warm. I finished doing my homework and helped  my mother do housework. My parents are coming back  very happy to say:"It's my good son.I will take you to food fame steadily tonight。”I am very happy.I am waiting for eat great food.By the way,What do you do at the Dragon Boat Festival?Happy Dragon Boat to you!Have a good time！